• hairyfeet@lemmy.ml
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    Really liked a lot of the ideas and tech/magic. What I’ve struggled with is 4 pages of description for one page of story/plot development. The Jolenta sex was weird, unnecessary/out of character for both of them and just seemed like the author getting off on it.

    Were there clues on who the Autarch was or was it just a reveal?

    Did not spot Neil Armstrong, Jonas?

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      All of that wordy exposition is hinting at a couple layers of backstory that won’t makes sense until your 2nd or 3rd time thru the series. Yes it’s all important, but on a first read thru, you’re probably fine to skip that stuff. As for that out of character scene, >!Severian raped Jolenta!< - he’s an unreliable narrator, remember?