• Donjuanme@lemmy.world
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    1 year ago

    I find the headline to be much more coherent. I get what you’re complaining about with articles not being informative towards their headlines statement, or headline statements not having anything to do with the articles therein, but this time I’m giving them a pass. Single sentences should not have a paragraph break, let alone the multiple breaks in this “sentence”

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        1 year ago

        I’m just gonna say it: it’s not a single sentence. It’s a series of malformed paragraphs each consisting of a sentence fragment.

        Or that’s what it is in English. I think legalese had different rules of grammar.

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        1 year ago

        I’m just gonna say it: it’s not a single sentence. It’s a series of malformed paragraphs each consisting of a sentence fragment.

        Or that’s what it is in English. I think legalese had different rules of grammar.